Nickname:K-JiO Country:United States City:Los Angeles State:CA Gender:Male Age:36 Member Since:Nov 11, 2007 Last Login:Nov 20, 2009 Poems Submitted:148 Poem Comments:429 Poem Views:20,102 Member Comments:109
Commented on the poem "A Lyrical High" on 11/19/09 at 04:31 PM
Lyrical higs ... lyrica epipahnies/ way better sometimes than a morning at Tiffanies/ Like words to a wordsmith, they'd know what to do with these/ letting the flow come off of their lips ... with ease ...
nice write lil' ma. As a child of rhyme myself, I can appreciate this piece. This was a nice write. Keep cre8'in, and congrats on being today's featured poet.
Pain hurts ... maybe that's why they call it PAIN! Everyones threashhold for pain is different, and it's insensitive for someone to say that you don't know pain, simply because it's not the pain that they've gone through. This is a poignant piece. Keep cre8'in.
Commented on the poem "7 Days" on 11/17/09 at 10:29 PM
I like the last line "Eagerly awaiting to taste the salt on your skin" ... now that's erotic. This rivals my piece of the same name, but I think yours is a little hotter :) I have a collaboration for you ... let me know if you're up for it. This is a hot write sis ... keep cre8'in
Commented on the poem "Sexual Eruption" on 11/17/09 at 12:05 AM
This was hot if I do say so myself. bye reading this, I can imagine that the women of GS get pretty hot and bothered when you drop a verse on 'em, especially if your flow is as hot as this one, on a consistent basis ... keep cre8'in.
Enticing words from the B-More ... I'm sure you left him shook. This was a hot write lil' ma', very hot indeed. Keep it cum'n and keep cre8'in. I'd like to read more :)
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Commented on the poem "A Lyrical High" on 11/19/09 at 04:31 PM
