Nickname:K-JiO Country:United States City:Los Angeles State:CA Gender:Male Age:35 Member Since:Nov 11, 2007 Last Login:Nov 20, 2008 Poems Submitted:125 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:350 Poem Views:10,341 Member Comments:90
Cleverly written acrostics can be subliminal ... I can see how this can spark thought. I might have write some of these ... lol. I'm sure that you wouldn't mind having hot sauce with your taco. Nice write sis ... kep cre8'in :)
Commented on the poem "Save ME" on 11/19/08 at 06:22 PM
Sounds like the person of mention needs saving ... from the world, from themselves. This is an interesting piece to me only because from my perspective, people let people influence what it is that they do say and think, even if they don't want to. It would be nice if people would keep their thoughts to themselves, and everyone was as sweet as pie ... but this is real life, and that's never going to be the case. What can be done is to keep ones business to oneself, and if anyone has anything to say about it, just say none of your business. This was a cool write sis ... keep cre8'in. I'll be back thru.
Commented on the poem "Ode To The Pussy" on 11/14/08 at 04:45 PM
SHE isn't to be toyed with ... pleasured, and treasured yes ... but never toyed with. Nice write sis. It's been a while since I've been through, but I'm glad I came through today. Keep cre8'in.
Commented on the poem "If He Only Knew" on 10/06/08 at 04:38 PM
Wow, you're not from L.A. R U ... lol. This is a nice write. To the lucky man to whom this is expressed ... you got yo'self a fine woman :) I'll be back thru.
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Commented on the poem "SOUTH OF THE BORDER" on 11/20/08 at 12:04 PM
