Nickname:K-JiO Country:United States City:Los Angeles State:CA Gender:Male Age:36 Member Since:Nov 11, 2007 Last Login:Nov 06, 2009 Poems Submitted:148 Poem Comments:428 Poem Views:19,723 Member Comments:109
Commented on the poem "Undress Me" on 11/06/09 at 06:09 PM
I like the visual that you gave, particulary at the end ... very nice. This was a hot write ... worthy of 10 starz if we still had the rating system. anywho, I'll say it again ... this was a tight write. Keep cre8'in sis.
Commented on the poem "Cum Mr.DJ" on 11/05/09 at 04:40 PM
Makin' love in the club ... that's hot. This was tight write my friend. I'd like to read what happened the morning after (lol) Keep cre8'in sis ... much luv
This was a very hot write to say the least. It took my imagination there. Keep cre8'in sis ... again, this was hot.
Commented on the poem "Good Math" on 11/03/09 at 10:32 PM
And they said that Einstiens Theory of Relativity was the formula of the Century ... this is real math ...
This was a tight write ... very passionate. If we were still rating, I'd give you 10 starz for this one. Nice write ... keep cre8'in
Commented on the poem "Take it" on 10/31/09 at 05:19 PM
I see you have the sugar pussy as well ... lol. This was a hot write ... had me going. I have to say though, if I'm getting on all fours, I'm gonna drive yo' ass crazee (lmao) This was a tight write. Keep cr8'in
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Commented on the poem "Undress Me" on 11/06/09 at 06:09 PM
