Nickname:K-JiO Country:United States City:Los Angeles State:CA Gender:Male Age:37 Member Since:Nov 11, 2007 Last Login:Sep 05, 2010 Poems Submitted:154 Poem Comments:454 Poem Views:25,629 Member Comments:125
This sounds like a manifesto of sorts. This took the reader on a journey that tethered on the erotic side. Oh, and the mention of the chocolates were a nice touch ¦-)
This had more of a spoken word poetry slam give to it as opposed to a rapp, none-the-less, I liked it. A bit on the erotic side, but aptly categorized in the love section. Nice write.