i'm haven't been on the site in quite a while but i'm glad this was the first piece i read. wow this is such a beautiful and phenomenal piece. i loved the use of your metaphors and simile as you told a tale that has invaded some folks lives at one time or another.
Untouched_Soul, you so nasty but I love it. Without a doubt, I love the way you told this story from beginning to end with explicit hardcore erotikism. I thought I was peekin' in on one of your sessions and couldn't help it. You're right the mission was accomplished!
luvin' the imagery and flow to get the message across. true that, otherwise someon will become distracted by others who are servin' it on a platter. lol
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Commented on the poem "I SAW A MAN TALK TO GOD" on 09/06/09 at 06:05 PM
