Commented on the poem "More Than Words" on 10/09/09 at 07:36 PM
I LOVED IT. YOUR WORDPLAY WAS AMAZING. "You are the best of the best
Within Gods design
So no less than what's the best
Is what I call mine
You're one of kind
Which makes you divine
So I'm inclined to fine
What makes us bind
Twist, wrap around, and intertwine " THIS WAS GREAT!! 10PTS
Commented on the poem "Porn Star" on 10/06/09 at 11:00 PM
wow!!!! that was deep and mad yo!! loving it. keep it up. "perfectly saturated in love's flavor
each conversation possessing something to savor
as we grow beautifully in one another
drawing these fragile hearts closer
through the power
of an ulitmate friendship
seizing each moment as we further develop it
into the greatest tag team to ever come together
focused on enduring the stormy weather
blizzards, sleet, snow and rain
as well as sadness, anger, bliss and pain" good work man!! 10 stars
Commented on the poem "Always" on 10/06/09 at 10:57 PM
i am loving your words. u are a genius with the pen. perfectly saturated in love's flavor
each conversation possessing something to savor
as we grow beautifully in one another
drawing these fragile hearts closer
through the power
of an ulitmate friendship
seizing each moment as we further develop it
into the greatest tag team to ever come together
focused on enduring the stormy weather
blizzards, sleet, snow and rain
as well as sadness, anger, bliss and pain ------ this was beautiful!!!!
i loved it. the wordplay was amazing and u gave such a strong image for us. great collab... 10pts
Commented on the poem "Miconception" on 09/16/09 at 07:34 PM
This was so deep. ppl have to look inside every word to truly understand what is being said. and that is the truth that folks must comprehend. haters make the world go round, and confidence proves u will always stand your ground....
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