Well this is definetely different to your other topics, I like it. I'd love to know what inspired it x
Commented on the poem "rational" on 03/17/07 at 05:44 PM
:( wow, I can relate so much to this. You sounded like you just poured your heart into this one. I like the fact that it doesn't flow like you would expect it to; it seems to symbolise an internal disruption. You and me got some talking to do Mister xXx
Real good my love, I'd love to hear you do that as a spoken word piece on stage. It's got a great flow, and I like the comparisons you use.
Commented on the poem "I.M. Atlas" on 03/06/07 at 05:25 PM
'And yet I cannot fall' - beautiful. Such a good way to describe the feeling of being torn between two status' at once. Very powerful x
Commented on the poem "I.M. Rage" on 03/06/07 at 05:22 PM
Very good Bleak, go back through it and check some of the spelling though. I like the feeling you create with this one, putting emotions into words. x
Peace Out...
November 25, 2006 at 08:09 AM
I'm gonna quit using Ghettosoul for a while, I'm indecisive as to whether I should put up anymore poetry or not at the moment. I may choose not to do so anymore. Thank you to the people who rated, commented and checked out my poetry. I'm still gonna be checking out people's work 'cos there is some real talent here waiting to be discovered. Peace...
Bleak, Mum, to my favourite poets...keep writing!
Kizzy
"Use what you have to run toward your best - that's how I now live my life." - Oprah Winfrey
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Commented on the poem "only at this moment, (mabey not the next)" on 05/11/07 at 06:36 AM
