well, i dnt do non of theses things so i guess im pretty wise.. no but good write, way to discribe silly hoes.. matter of fact i think ill do a response to this called silly hoes
OK ok OK, so let me get this understood, homeboi got this serious passion for this girl right, n he jus sittin bac trippin on what to say to her... awww thats cute...emotions like that r sexylol... but all that building of passion finna make for some good lovin... good write, it made me smile
ma i do kno how much they weigh. I have felt so much pain n have tried to end it all, but in the end God will see u and will work on ur behalf. just stick it out and continue to work hard.... u should read my poems recontruction rehab series and a song of life, i think u night like them.
Yup, there r days where u just need to reflect by urself with no imput from anyone else but ur soul, take a deep breath release it through ur pen n onto a lines surface... mmm the best kind of therapy. Good write
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Commented on the poem "Cry Brotha Cry!" on 10/17/07 at 11:00 PM
