Commented on the poem "dis-->CONNECTED" on 11/20/08 at 12:23 AM
LP WAS HERE I HAD READ THIS ALREADY JUST FORGOT TO COMMENT............AMAZING AND SO DEEP. WE OFTEN FORGET ABOUT WHO GOT US TO WHERE WE ARE AND WHO WILL TAKE US TO WHERE WE NEED TO BE. YET THE GOOD THING IS HE NEVER FORGETS ABOUT US AND HE IS THERE ALWAYS .
Commented on the poem "LookCloser" on 11/20/08 at 12:19 AM
TEEBEE YOU HAVE BEEN CRAFTING POETRY LIKE A POTTER LATELY THIS WAS OUTSTANDING
THIS I CAN DEFINATELY RELATE TO AND ATTEST THAT IT IS YOU ALL DAY. YOU ARE ALWAYS THERE FOR OTHERS AND I AM ONE OF THOSE OTHERS. I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU ARE APRECIATED AND I AM ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU. SO......ARE YOU OK? ARE YOU STRESSED?
WOW TEEBEE I LOVE THESE LINES "I love how you hold me and sing in my ear
Once tainted realities now seem clear
I am the artist and you are what I envision
I am the writer and you need no revisions
In a room full of people our eyes meet
Because our ears search for each others heart beat" SUCH POETIC WORDING TO DESCRIBE A BOND SO DEAR
"WHAT YOU LOOKING FOR YOU ARE THE QUESTION AND THE ANSWER"
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Commented on the poem "dis-->CONNECTED" on 11/20/08 at 12:23 AM
