Illy. Sounds like some stuff me and my besty would write! lol definitely feel you in this. Not diggin the Ja but the piece is ill! lol
Commented on the poem "History" on 12/02/08 at 09:25 PM
Well if it can be taken anyway.. the way I took it is.. well I was thinking..Sometimes females don't know the way they hurt dudes.. Especially when it comes to pride and dignity.. That's one thing to me that you can break on a dude.. if not his heart.. "Im a man with pride you dont do shit like that..you dont just pick up and leave and leave me sick like that.." Jay.. But to the poem.. The first stanza stuck with me.. definitely loved it. Im definitely seeing talent from you and look forward to reading more =]
Commented on the poem "Therapy" on 12/02/08 at 09:19 PM
Wow.. very nice.. I read it like a song.. could deff hear someone spitting or singing this.. the flow was on it.. some ill lines in here.. i could deff picture it in my head.. loved.
Commented on the poem "All I've Known" on 12/02/08 at 09:14 PM
Made this a fav cause I really loved. Left me feeling some kind of way yo.. But I hope one day you know another side of love because it is so much more =]
Commented on the poem "Like Them" on 12/02/08 at 09:12 PM
I like this because its different.. the opposite of what I usually see.. Someone wanting to become a part of society instead of being the different individual one.. unless you were being sarcastic then i missed it!
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Commented on the poem "When my ink bleeds" on 12/02/08 at 09:27 PM
