Commented on the poem "As....." on 10/12/08 at 09:19 PM
damn... you stop right there i really got in to is poem...
very good you got to give me some tips...
teach all of us how we really write a true poem
Commented on the poem "This Journey" on 10/06/08 at 05:29 AM
i really like this one and i love the way it starts out because it's very true...
life is like a journey.
but have you ever thought of life like a card game... you happy until you lose...
your a 10 in my book...
if you can wake up and smile you shouldn't have any worry that man is on his way but just tha god for each and every day... much love, you a 10
Commented on the poem "Never" on 10/06/08 at 05:05 AM
you don't need anyone thats not going to respect you as a beautyful young lady but you don't have to answer to anyone but your-self at the end of the day. every female is a queen you just have to let everyone else know...
much love...you a 10
Commented on the poem "if you cant." on 10/06/08 at 04:50 AM
it sound like you fell deep in love and came across ten stars... much love....
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