Man this was hot i like this write ma man you was deep with this one keep doing ya thang and keep movin that pen girl Oh and ps i love the back ground.....100 starz if i could give em LOL keep on keep strong ma!
Commented on the poem "" on 10/11/09 at 06:51 PM
Man girl you got some raw emotions 4 real but you real nice when it comes to writtin em out man you got off on the first verswe you spit or destiny called she got off 4real man this was hot from the begining to end specialy the begining you guys got fire good collabo and keep movin your pen girl you got a gift i hope to see more of your writes but this time try to make a write that has god in it stay blessed girl and keep movin that pen
ASKED HIM WHY HIS ATTITUDE
WAS SO SCREWED UP.
HE THEN TOLD ME THAT IT WAS
JUST A PART OF HOW HE GREW UP. this was so filthy right here i love this bar this hard girl once again keep writtin from the soul ma
Commented on the poem "DYING TO LIVE" on 10/09/09 at 07:34 PM
Man once again ma this really sounds like you writtin this from the hart im lovin this reall talk i dont know why they took the star rating off of here but if i could i would give you a fresh ten girl this is hard man you got talent specialy when it comes from the hart. my favorite part is were you said the best i ever i had LOL that was fya girl no lie keep movin that pen expresion from the hart lovely write girl....100 starz
Commented on the poem "YO, POPS!!!" on 10/09/09 at 07:29 PM
Man girl this is deep 4 real i feels you on this and ima explain i know what its like to have a father thats not really around man you really rocked this girl i could tell this really came from the hart what i would say is be better than him you know keep your head up somthin will come your way so beautiful and you are so right he is going to have to answer to god in the end .....man this a strong subject 4 real but yeah girl keep doin your thing keep makeing them poems from ya hart on the real and dont let no body tell you any diffrent.....much love
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Commented on the poem "Until the end..(dedicated to Sonny)" on 10/18/09 at 06:44 PM
