that was real. i connected with this work on so many levels and its really rare to find poetry that hits home but this was real. kinda makes me feel a little stronger, like iike this pain that im enduring is temporary and the strength will last longer. idk. thanks.
Commented on the poem "A Real Night" on 07/12/09 at 08:07 PM
im feeling the ocean background you have goin on, thats wassup. this was a nice write. keep the pen movin
Commented on the poem "But why?" on 07/12/09 at 08:03 PM
so the boy was buried alive... i gotcha. this was kinda crazy and im really feeling how you put it in the perspective of the victim
Commented on the poem "Time: the end" on 07/12/09 at 08:00 PM
well....im lost? why were people shooting? what did they steal that got them into that situation....so many unanswered questions....good write though.
Commented on the poem "Time [Part 7]" on 07/12/09 at 07:57 PM
who got shot! whos leg is shot! is everything okay?
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