Commented on the poem "Ms. Light Skin" on 11/06/09 at 09:29 PM
aww! puppy love, how cute. i like this one reminds me of my high school days...lol! Bravo
Commented on the poem "Tell Me!!!" on 11/04/09 at 02:02 PM
Awwww...wonderfully written. very cleaver. i loved the word play and how you explained in detail of how you were feeling. this painted a really good picture of what you were tryin to say in my imagination. i think we have all been here a time or two. Bravo! excellent write.
*claps...love the word play! i am not one for alot of cussin in poetry but you spent every word right and it fit. very well written. bravo!
Commented on the poem "How Can I?" on 10/29/09 at 09:13 AM
Bravo! I really loved this piece, the flow of words were put together very well. I can feel this piece, I have been here before. So i know what you mean. Thanks for this! Great job