you guys both did great on this piece i like the lines 1-10 most also the lines "complexity of the soul "and so on.the line about the bowled legging i get it,you know what they say about the walk,i sure do,10 mr.him
you really felt that way its a sad poem but i like it it needs a touch from my pen to make it a amster piece.so can i have it?whats up with the sad poems have you been taking your happy pillls that make you see purple bunnies climbing on trees lately..you still dont believe i grew up to be this beautiful thing?you grew up nicely though you look more like a man now still got the baby face though thats what i like most.
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Commented on the poem "Collabo - WE JUDGE BY WHAT WE SEE AND NOT BY WHAT WE KNOW...." on 08/01/09 at 08:29 PM
