haha...Brutha Clinician...Pass that shit to me when you finish inhaling!..haha..this is definitely an inner-battle between two departments of self...the Id is gonna fight for its right to be noticed, but the Superego, see's no one but itself...so I think the Id is gonna have a long battle on its hands...very creative worded thought bro...
I'm feeling the certainty of the write, the confidence of the metaphoric wordplay...And this line...(Sending spiritual praise to the hemisphere causing jealousy from the stratosphere)...had me cheesin bro!..hahaha...now i'm off to part 2
Yall Are Friggin MAD!!!..hahaha...this is creatively crazy!!...a mixture of subliminal messages, humor, lyrical skills, metaphorical genius wordplay...excellently established....Brutha Clinician...You brought back memories with Hong Kong Phooey's short-term memory..haha...that was my cartoon!..
Ohh boy!! What a creative way to tell a testimonial!...I could hear you preaching this sermon, banging on the pulpit of life...This was high powered...I miss yo stankin azz on here with your very heart felt, real life writes!!!...Very well stated...BRAVO RAW!...
Brutha Clinician...GAWT DAMN! Your word play and etymological collaborations made this write look like the alphabet went on a class field trip to Diction Great Adventure...with sharp linguistic curves and new syllablc heart stoppers..Why do I see my childhood super hereo Letter Man crying in the corner crumbled in fetal position...dude I had to read it twice to make sure I was feeling the full concept of why you write...Which was stated in the first two lines...(My ink writes right’s rites of righteousness projected through what society deems right
As they legitimize on our wrongs to make themselves look rightful yet their really fools who write)...A definite fav...You make sure you stay on your grind with the constant elevation of your wordsmith mind...
Why I Write...
September 06, 2008 at 04:15 PM
Whaddup Folks....
I just wanted to let whoever reads my poetry know a few things...
I write in order to communicate my inner feelings about life, love, politics and other issues that formulate our Mental/Physical/Spiritual & Emotional being. Most people come into your life for a reason, some for a season, and some are just there because u've formulated an attachment to them either thru love, babies or just your homie/homess for life...whether u like them now or not, they've affected u in some way, and they matter, because if they didn't u would not be writing 1, 2 or 12 poems about their stankin azz...They are who they are...Let them be...and truly LOVE them all the same regardless, (which is sometimes hard to do, not the sicko's, though, the rapist, child-abusers and other sick fuckin freaks--no luv for them)...if they get on your nerves, let them know. Some of my poems were inspiried by these moments, when my words at that time may mis-represent me, or I'm just too mad and just wanna "Cut A Muthafuka too short to shit"..hahah (jokin) my pop's use to say that...anyhoo.
Thank you for viewing my inner-thoughts...and if its about u...SO WHAT!! If u were affected or disagree with my ideas...GET OVER IT!! or just let me know your view, disagreement is sometimes healthy, it's the TOXIC disagreeable beings u gotta worry about.
Mavrick...out!
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