Nickname:Michae-Angele Country:United States City:The Best City in tha WORLD State:CA Gender:Female Age:20 Member Since:Jul 25, 2006 Last Login:Nov 19, 2009 Poems Submitted:31 Poem Comments:566 Poem Views:6,234 Member Comments:96
Commented on the poem "Miscarriage" on 07/20/09 at 11:40 AM
wow...you painted such a vivid picture...its almost a like watching the scene through a window...amazing...ONLY a GREAT writer can do THAT...not only did you paint an unusually clear picture, but you conveyed the hurt and mix of emotions very well too...I felt this-- real talk...I can't wait to read more from you...Much Love
although i heard one of your soulcasts, i could have guessed just by the natural rhythm of your words that you were a rapper..you flow so effortlessly..and you have quite a few clever lines in this one..my fav-->"But baby, I tried, what more can I say,
They say, if you fail try again another day,
In another way, but what they say seems to fade,
‘Cause in school if you fail, you end up in the same grade. "...that was tight...like honestly...what else can ya do but give props lol we should hook up on a poem or a track sometime tho..lemme know whats good...Much Love,
Michae-Angele
Commented on the poem "Pussy Farts" on 06/21/09 at 07:01 AM