this was a really good piece.. thinking of you in the middle of the night longing for the next time you might com efix me up right then lay next to me holding you tight that was ill
Commented on the poem "It's Spring" on 11/18/09 at 12:47 PM
this was a nice piece a switch from what i have been reading from you but i see your talented in other work besides erotica you have a gift i hope you use it cause it will be ashamed to have us not be able to read you
Commented on the poem ".:I Want You:." on 11/18/09 at 12:45 PM
this was perfect your style is really intense i can tell you write with passion, i also think your writes make you horny while you write them lol great work
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Commented on the poem "Light Breezes (Desire)" on 11/18/09 at 05:01 PM
