man this poem right here is to deep. i like it so much bcuz i can relate to just about every word in it bcuz um going through some similar things right now. you really just made me cry bcuz i was not only reading your poem but i felt it and not to many ppl can make me feel there work but you did. i try to write and express like that but i just ain't got it, but when i read stuff like this and it be good it make me wanna keep on trying. so i just wanna let you know that you just really inspired me.. so with that said THANK YOU so much and i will continue to read yo work
Commented on the poem "the roof top" on 09/29/08 at 03:09 PM
WOW. this is raw, i felt it and the way you gave yo details i caould picture myself there. and then how you twisted it up at the end that was "HOT" you did yo thing on this one, i ain't this good yet but i tell you one thing you inspired me to keep going. Nice Job!!!! keep up the good work and hit me up everytime you put a new poem on.
Commented on the poem "struggle" on 09/29/08 at 03:03 PM
short and simple but deep. so often times people get so caught up in telling a message with-in a message, and we forget how to just give a simple thank you. so i like yo work man, and be encouraged and kaap doin yo thang.
Commented on the poem "i dont know" on 06/26/08 at 12:29 AM
this one was kinda weak i think you have a good flow but when you wrte just take us there let us feel what you feeling as you express yo self thru yo poem nut for the most part i liked it and keep on doing what you doing baby girl and always stay true to how yoyu feel
thats whats up cuz it is so true men beat on women like they toys or something we deserve the same respect that yall get. an to all my ladies out there if you don't already know let me be the first to tell u that you don't need no man to sit around an beat on you cuz we r some powerful creature that god made us an we can do bad all by or selves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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