Commented on the poem "Just Be Me" on 02/06/07 at 05:30 PM
I LOVE THIS ONE, I REALLY DO, I GOTTA MAKE THIS ONE A FAVE SHEA U DID YO THANG ON THIS ONE, I WAS FEELIN THIS 100% GIRL 4 STARZ ALL THE WAY! KEEP EM COMIN GIRL!
Commented on the poem "Tears" on 02/06/07 at 05:28 PM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL SHEA, U PUT SO MUCH MEANING INTO IT, THIS IS A DEEP ONE, I LIKE THE WAY U WRITE TO, 4 STARZ GIRL!
Commented on the poem "If" on 02/06/07 at 05:18 PM
NICE LOVE POEM GIRL, I CAN SEE HOW U FEEL, BUT U CAN ONLY TRY THINGS OUT, IF U WANT AN ANSWER TO UR WAT IFS, 4 STARZ ON UR WRITE, IT WAS HOT
Commented on the poem "Motherly Fool" on 02/06/07 at 05:15 PM
DATS TRUE IN SOME CASES SHANTAE, I WAS FEELIN THE POEM A LOT, I KNOW OF A "MOTHERLY FOOL" WHO TREATS HER KIDS LIKE THAT, AND ALL I CAN DO DAILY IS PRAY FOR THEM AND THEIR MOTHER, U KNOW THEIRS A LOT OF FATHERLY FOOLS TOO, U SHOULD MAKE THAT A PART 2, KEEP EM COMIN GIRL, 4 STARZ