Commented on the poem "My Heart" on 05/21/09 at 01:33 PM
"i'm sorry but selfishly i want you to stay, and i hate myself for it everyday, just promise you'll never stray"
So much truth in this, Love = Fear.. Fear of Hurt, Fear of flight. I love how you ended it with the basic premise of what our heart is full of... FEAR.. I like this.
Commented on the poem "A man for me..." on 05/21/09 at 01:24 PM
3 lines killed the game on this one. sometimes the simplest of requests are damn near immpossible to give. 3 is the number of completion in GOD's World, so much love for dropping a complete depiction of what a man for you should be.