Commented on the poem "MY LAST LOVER" on 07/09/09 at 11:32 PM
Wow this right here, I really felt it girl.
Commented on the poem "My playlist" on 11/19/08 at 03:56 PM
Damn! This made me hot n' heaaaaavay! I really like the style of this poem so much, I WANT IT AS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! I don't know what ot say. I'm just sooooooooooo speechless. Oh I LOVE IT! 10 STRZ!
Commented on the poem "NOT PERFECT" on 11/03/08 at 09:48 PM
Even though you made your mistakes, it's the thing that has t change and you reallywant to do that. I want to tell you keep going and say real like ou were always doing. on't cry cause I cried and had tget though all my problems and situations also. Keep ya head up.
Commented on the poem "DREAM GIRL" on 11/03/08 at 09:44 PM
Just to think of it, I never thought a poem this short would even have me crying like this. dang, boo don't worry ya dream gurls is just around the corner, so the best thing to do is be paient like you already are doing and she will come to you. Little do you know She may be there and you just don't see it yet. Trust me you will.
Commented on the poem "Everyday Thang" on 10/24/08 at 01:59 PM
I really do understand your flow. Very well preserved. It's may not seem as if anybody can deal with that everyday, but many of us have to see through it. I love it n be encouraged. 10 Strz for keeping it real.