its true... stupid stuff on here jus makes dis site so freakin stupid to work wit anymore... makes you really stop an think about who killed it... no one wants to take the blame tho... but dis was definately very cool of a write... i love it when heart felt chemistry comes out... theres nottin betta than "raw poetry..." ;)
Commented on the poem "Do I?" on 12/07/08 at 05:48 AM
well, the way i see it mama... horrible actions from past relationships should be left where they are, in the past... an besides, how else would you get over everything, an allow the blessin to flow if you dont take dat leap of faith... if your heart is filled wit faith, den you cant fear... an best believe, no risk, no reward... i dont think if you do, should be a question, it should be a comment... that you did... ;)
Commented on the poem "RelationSHIP" on 12/07/08 at 05:38 AM
rounds of applause... very nice work mama... dis was definately a very cool poem... i wish i could hear you read it... im sure itll sound betta comin from you, jus so dat i can hear how its supposed to flow... very nice nevertheless... you got two tthumbs up here mama...
Commented on the poem "Fucked by Love" on 12/07/08 at 05:35 AM
wtf... mah, this was some crack to the soul forreal... for anyone that loves the drama material, then you would love dis piece... very lovely write, an a fantantic job, well done...
Commented on the poem "Rebel Rising" on 12/05/08 at 06:10 AM
dog you got the word play like you ready to launch an all out war... dis is like some pitch fork, an torches typa poem... hands down you did yo job on dis one...