Commented on the poem "Hopeless Romance" on 11/18/09 at 05:51 PM
I love the rhyming sequence.. And the way you wrote this; simple and to the point. Just the way it should be.. And i agree with after vision.. Hard but fair.
Wow... This is an amazing write. You penned the pain and emotion perfectly.. It was like i was tehre watching it.. I loved hearing about this from a man's perspective for once.. Nice write. (: