Commented on the poem "Pricless" on 09/05/08 at 11:08 AM
Wow! I really enjoyed this whoole concept baby bruh! Very sweet. Loved it except the liine "let me be that substitute" ... If you are tellin baby gilr that you are the bling then BE the mahfuckin BLING! lol, cause you know you are! Much love
Again, we love brothas that ain't afraid to show emotion (without bein uber-metro-sexual, LOL)! These are the internal thoughts us women never get to hear. Thank you love!
Commented on the poem "Third World War" on 08/12/08 at 12:48 PM
so much creativity here, where to begin...loved how this piece journey from light to dark and back. I especially liked how you injected poems within the poems...the alphabetized lists could stand alone as a work of art. Original premise too, I just love this one all-around...