Damn shawty....you did ya thing on this one...the metaphors you used is amazing...Once I started reading I couldn't stop. Ya rhymes were on point and I look forward to reading more of your work
Commented on the poem "Mouth Fuck" on 09/05/07 at 04:22 PM
OMG! Are you serious?
Damn shawty...
wait a minute
i could hardly read all of it...the imagery was incredible..i mean...you made me...and then almost made me.....shit...i can't tell you...but 10 starz and a fav.
Round of applause to ya shawty...
great write....ya flow was sick and rediculous...10 starz and great response and add to the spit series
Commented on the poem "Contentment" on 08/19/07 at 11:43 AM
Whoa...coming from a REAL man's view...I loved it...I mean...he seems like he just want you to kiss his ass...like he don't realize how beautiful you are and your value...i wish i did have a woman to treat me like that...but the difference is she will feel very loved also...this was an amazing write shawty...and too bad the rating only goes to ten cuz you deserve more...don't settle for anything because you don't wanna be alone...cuz even in a relationship you can feel alone...well 10 stars shawty
Commented on the poem "" on 08/04/07 at 10:27 PM
Damn...what can I say...we always have that great chemistry together...this one flowed together like a river....WE do the best collabs together...honored to work witcha
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