Commented on the poem "Who's To Blame" on 11/06/09 at 02:50 PM
A lot of attitude in this write I love the way you worded this scribe, very strong and the message well put nice scribe poet pEACE.elevate
Commented on the poem "I Killed Poetry" on 11/03/09 at 07:02 AM
Creative indeed, this was fire I seen a little bit of my old writes in this one, I remember the many topics and situations you can put "Poetry" in. You mastered this one pEACE.elevate
Boy you omg this is so powerful and you know this a fav right, you skill the voice the message everything was just beautiful. I'm proud that some of our youth understand what is was like and how we should move pass everything that we was born into and change the cycle so this will not drain into our new comings. I loved it 100% pEACE.elevate
Commented on the poem "LoveHate Thing" on 11/02/09 at 08:18 PM
that message was unique nobody ever done that before, well that's another way of getting the poets attention lol okay well this was very smooth I like the tug-a-war between the love and hate. Took me back through a couple of relationships, but all in all this was nice poem I like the feel of it and the creativity was staggering "the message" nice hun pEACE.elevate