Nickname:☸۞folie à plusieurs ۞☸ Country:United States City:In Cali's Kutt's Lettin My Soul Slap And Mind be at peace...Doing Me like They Can't Do... State:CA Gender:Male Age:25 Member Since:Aug 20, 2006 Last Login:Nov 06, 2009 Poems Submitted:323 Poem Comments:1,383 Poem Views:15,711 Member Comments:116
Commented on the poem "colourless" on 11/06/09 at 08:47 PM
wow....hmm...this was like a song singing 2 my soul...even tho it was a sad piece it touched a warm part....god bless babi u already kno this is loved...
Commented on the poem "journal type (i)" on 11/06/09 at 08:44 PM
hmmm....damn...i agree wit Geel and Clinc....as well as most everyone this was truly a very emotional and heart wrenching piece....it's hard 2 be the strong 1...2 be the bigger person...no no...2 be the rider as u said...the outside shell show's a lover unfaultered and shook...that no other woman could take or break....and on the inside it's warm and puddy clay molding into a insecure ideaology...and thought....I am sorry that u have 2 go threw this queen truly...but as i've been taught time and time again....love isn't the word...not even more so the action as much as the feeling..and if u feel him like u said...ur doing right...he's not....but who know's of his battles as does he know of urs?...we all fight these emotions and urges and so much more inside daily...and 2 give ur love..let alone urself 2 someone is often so hard....i kno from personal experience...i share something most don't kno bout me...i keep myself at bay and in the field of the"Game" even tho i don't consider myself a player..cuz i don't do how i used 2...only because i am afraid 2 completely let it all go and give in..because mankind has a bad habbit of selling dreams and not backing them up with the actualzation...feel me?...so the way i look @ love...and who i give what i give 2 ...is...many are in my life..and feel they are this or that..but only I kno...and it won't be shown or even seen as much as felt in my heart 2 them...i could tell u and 50 thousand other females i love them...and mean it..but it isn't about if i mean it...its about if u believe it 2 be truth...and if it is...so don't seek justifacation or validation just play ur role queen be his rider as u are so it seems and let him prove what u should already know...cuz i kno from experience that sometimes no a lot of the times...people tell u they love u so much...would do anything 4 u...and then when it's time 2 put up or shut up...they don't put up..but won't shut up....as they say babigurl real reconize real...and u truly are real...and this was beautiful and a fav. of mine as many other's I'm sure...
Whatever did say it best...its sad that our focus goes on so many things that are triveal in the long process.. yet we're short sighted and only focused on what we want and need....not the broader scape of things there was a lot of food 4 thoguht in this piece...and i thank u 4 it..
Commented on the poem "I will be there" on 11/04/09 at 11:20 PM
Love the emotion in this piece...how love is willing 2 go 2 know end...and u conveyed that lovely...and the ending was perfect...simple and profound in the same...are u ready?? cuz I've been ready...it's a battle we both face so let's face it 2gether and never will i let go trust i feel u on that 1 king..god bless beautiful piece of gods artwork delievered off ur unique lip's...much respect Bruh
lol gotta agree with josh on this 1....but this was a very well written piece...as well as thought out...and the pure blunt truth of it..the swagg is just alluring i an fixated on its aroama:D beautiful queen...remind me of Xscape lol
The Story U told Me....Bout the Man who Get's Flowers 4 The Moon....I Had it Backwards..... I Thought U Were The Moon and I was Ur Wolverine But Ur The Trickster aren't U.....I'm Just the Fool Who Got Played...Worst Part Of it Is I should Have Known....But I ignored My Insticts...I Ignored WHAT I
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Commented on the poem "colourless" on 11/06/09 at 08:47 PM
