Nickname:One Country:United States City:burlington State:NJ Gender:Male Age:31 Member Since:Dec 18, 2007 Last Login:Oct 06, 2008 Poems Submitted:855 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:7,625 Poem Views:51,550 Member Comments:569
enjoying the plays on words..."To many emotions moving
Through my weak end
Branchless trees
Can’t climb up with no growth"
as well as I see you playing with the repetition...."Just need some time, And a little bit of help"...sometimes a lil affection is all you need as the impetus to encourage growth...but through this write it seems you actually might be the one loving yourself...encouraging your self....nurturing your self...writing for your self..."The last piece to this exhibit
Prevails a picture of me naked
And right beside me lay
A sliced up blanket."...Love the thoughts that these images conjure up...{especially the naked part...lol}....Nawl but it is like you are constantly cutting holes within your covering in order to see the self beneath the exterior...Like all the best revelations are the ones which you will reveal to yourself....well done dear lady...
Love the way the story starts from searching and travels to finding that all one had to do was look inside the center of the circle...to find themselves a place of comfort......but truthfully...the way you handled this was quite masterful...felt like a compelling testimony of sorts...I thoroughly enjoyed this...have to fave it
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Commented on the poem "Humbly Educate Your Sanity" on 10/06/08 at 03:09 PM
