Nickname:Pip Country:United States City:My Own Little World State:PA Gender:Female Age:17 Member Since:Mar 24, 2008 Last Login:Oct 16, 2008 Poems Submitted:55 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:530 Poem Views:2,685 Member Comments:166
woww again I can relate to this one! And first off let me say this poem is alot better then that song! i love the lines "At the thought, and the sight of them moving on
Having relations with your Once-Upon-A-Time-Best-Friend ". this poem really captures everything there is to tell about loosing your first love. bravo poet! 10 starz
Commented on the poem "Final Confession" on 06/23/08 at 08:47 AM
wow this is exactly how I feel right now i didnt think anyone else felt that way. you have some amazing word play in here, i really liked the part about nowhere and and anywhere. but if she really means somethin to you dont let go just yet at least thats my advice. keep these writes coming!
Commented on the poem "Being Replaced" on 06/23/08 at 08:40 AM
oh wow. this was so deep and emotional homie, and I can relate alot to it. Your words are very powerful especially the line "But its funny how fast someone can take your place
When your “number one” " damnn if I dont know that feeling. wonderful write 10 starz and a fave!