Nickname:piss a mofo off Country:United States City:where the wind takes me State:IN Gender:Male Age:39 Member Since:Sep 14, 2007 Last Login:Nov 20, 2009 Poems Submitted:14 Poem Comments:241 Poem Views:1,122 Member Comments:1,003
well well well lookey here lookey here..this is a helluva acrostic Poet and keeping theme with the same letter only added to the punch
Commented on the poem "i am" on 11/20/09 at 02:39 PM
very interesting choice of words in this piece and even more rhetorical questions being administered at your hands..i see it being two things it could be GOD or WOMAN in a sense
Commented on the poem "Untitled" on 11/20/09 at 02:34 PM
i always have trouble commenting these types of pieces like metaphysical..i'll just say there's some hurt deeply rooted within these lines but the picture painted has masterpiece status
Commented on the poem "teach me" on 11/20/09 at 02:26 PM
*bell rings*...class dismissed...uhhh Gina can i see you after class please i think you need to be inflicted...uhh uhh instructed on a few things...*devilish smirk*...wheww..the backdrop only adds to the words..it's too early on friday to be thinking about anything like this...dam you Gina....lmao
*throws cards on the table too*...HOW THE FUCK YOU GOT 3 FUCKIN ACES AND I'VE GOT 2?!!..*pulls out pen* somebody bout to get sprayed in this bitch Brother Mav hand me some more of them verbal bullets to rearrange a few tops in this piece!!!
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Commented on the poem "F*I*V*E ~ D*E*A*D*L*Y ~ V*E*N*O*M*S" on 11/20/09 at 02:42 PM
