Commented on the poem "Demonstration" on 11/12/09 at 05:15 PM
Damn Red, you gonna have to fight them off with a stick u keep inking like this..lol but seriously this was so humbling and beautiful
Commented on the poem "Action Words" on 11/12/09 at 05:13 PM
You aint never lied..the truth sprinkled with humor...A poet with game Hmmhm
Commented on the poem "Vacancy" on 11/12/09 at 05:10 PM
Ms Gina this was truly emotional and your terminology was genius...It is so relatable on how you can give your all to receive nothing and the title was perfect for this piece...Great job
Commented on the poem "Keep pretending" on 11/12/09 at 04:41 PM
Tell his ass like it is---This had little words but packs a heavy punch..good job
Commented on the poem "Run" on 11/10/09 at 12:36 PM
This was painful and it pulled me in as I can envison this image...it also exudes a hint of sorrow but a nice read