Commented on the poem "Abandon pt 1" on 01/06/08 at 02:51 PM
i like that let me know when u do a part 2 soundz like she been threw alot can't wait to here wat happens nxt keep up dda good work i give it 10 starz
Commented on the poem "Hygiene" on 11/27/07 at 09:01 PM
man real talk dat iz so true honestly when u go 2 take a bath don't just look at da saop used dat shit a toothbrush wuz ment 4 brushing ur teeth dats y it's called a "toothbrush" get it oh yea thers this kinda white stuff sumtymez it'z clear called deoderant we used dat under or armz they should invest in it but i like da poem i'm put it on mi bebo page big brah
Commented on the poem "My Reflection" on 11/26/07 at 01:14 AM
i like da style of ur write it deep an strongly writin keep dat pen movein gurl u got skillz
WOW............datz all i can say naw wait lol u on da freaky side ain't ya it's a good poem i'll tell yea dat keep doin ya thang gurl i ain't made at cha
Commented on the poem "" THE PROPOSAL "" on 11/26/07 at 01:01 AM
awwwww dat iz so sweet if i were the gurl u would get a definate yez frm me that iz just to sweet love it 20 starz lol
A THOUGHT TO THINK ABOUT
November 26, 2007 at 01:26 AM
THE WISEST PERSON U KNO, CAN SOMETYMES MAKE A FALSE PREDICTION.........THINK ABOUT IT
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Commented on the poem "Abandon pt 1" on 01/06/08 at 02:51 PM
