lol this was cute in some parts! "You attract all bitches" So you're a story writer and a poet! I love it! The word play is off the chain in this one babe... I love the style, I love the concept, I love the passion! Keep writing!
omg this was powerful, I'm teary eyed. This story is immaculate honey! Very well constructed, very well put together, it flows wonderfully and grabs the reader's attention without a doubt. From the first line to the end, i could envision this story unfold.. def a 10 star.
Commented on the poem "Russian roulette" on 01/16/09 at 02:49 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS! I can hear this being performed while reading it. It flows so smoothly! This really gave me the chills, especially as I got closer and closer to the end of the piece. I was not anticipating how this would end, but it's a miraculous and profound ending. This def deserves a 10 star and fav from me!
Commented on the poem "FUCK IT THEN!!" on 01/16/09 at 02:44 AM
This is diff emotional. I see you had a lot of rage when writing this. I think it's an excellent piece and I'll give it a ten star. Keep writing girl!
I love how your poem actually reads directly to the audience. This is a very well written piece that grabs the attention of anyone and keeps it there with thoughts of how crazy this bitch really is. I wish you the best hun
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