Nice job on this piece. Expressed your emotions, and i am sure she will like this poem. No doubt..
Commented on the poem "Kodak Moment" on 11/11/08 at 01:06 PM
Aww , beautiful piece Rose. I am really feeling this one f`real... you can take my picture anytime, be my personal photographer :P ... Aw shucks, to cute, this poem. I love the way you write, beautiful. Keep them coming .. 10 stars :)
Aww, this is something. Everyone goes through this stage, i got my heart broken plenty of times sad to say. But dang, i can just picture all of that happening, i don't know why people like doing that. Why lead someone on to thinking that you like them and want to go somewhere with them when you really dont. I never really got that. But this was a good write hun, seems long but it was a quick read. 10 stars babes.
Lol .. Alright i see you mannn. This was heat. "Head so large ,
They should make brat doll out of you" BAHAHAHA. that is funny. Good job hun. And for some odd reason i couldn't hear the audio, so i had to read on by myself lol.. Keep them comingggg.
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Commented on the poem "Queen ShyShy(ONE DAY THESE WORDS COULD BE TRUE)" on 11/22/08 at 05:22 AM
