tHIS IS A WONDERFUL WRITE...YOUR LYRICAL FLOW IS CAPTIVATING ....YOUR SPOKEN WORD IS DEEP...I HAVE TO GIVE YOU TEN STARZ...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Commented on the poem "You & I" on 05/28/09 at 02:21 PM
tHIS IS PASSIONATE AND SINCERE...YOU DID WHAT MOST MEN WOULD NEVER DO WHICH IS ADMIT THAT YOU WERE IN THE WRONG....SAD TO SAY YES THE GIRL IS GONE..BUT AT LEAST YOU GET TO LEARN FROM THIS EXPERIENCE AND HOPEFULLY YOU WILL TREAT YOUR NEXT GIRL THE WAY SHE SHOULD BE TREATED...BUT OVERALL THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT POEM AND I GIVE YOU TEN STARZZZZ!
Commented on the poem "If I was a Girl" on 05/28/09 at 01:39 PM
i'M GLAD THIS IS JUST A HUMOROUS POEM....LOL...ANYWAYS NUCE WRITE AND I GIVE YOU TEN STARS.
Commented on the poem "Mr. Right" on 05/08/09 at 02:27 PM