Nickname:Princess Mia Country:United States City:Jackson State:MS Gender:Female Age:26 Member Since:Apr 08, 2008 Last Login:Nov 20, 2008 Poems Submitted:30 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:88 Poem Views:1,111 Member Comments:26
LOL! I like it. After reading that first line I'm not sure where my mind was trying to take me then you came in with, "if you shave I'll taste" lol! Then I was like, yeah my mind is in the right place! lol Good write.
This seems like a story that was told to me when I was little! (smile) Way to activate my creative mind.
Commented on the poem "Torn" on 11/13/08 at 04:25 AM
Very powerful. The desire to be loved and to have loved is a task in itself. You expressed it all in such a way that you pulled me into it more and more with the rise of each line. I really like this and I can relate as well.
Commented on the poem "Last Standing" on 11/13/08 at 04:15 AM
Whoa! Oh this was most definitely worth the wait! "Write myself out the script, then lie still"! lol I love it. P this is truly a masterpiece and its a fav. If I was the last one standing, I don't know where I would start.
Commented on the poem "Tears of a man" on 11/11/08 at 10:58 AM
This is very powerful! You really brought this one to life. My fav line is "Live by die by cuttthroat soldier; now scarred by name, tossed by heart, man by game". Awesome! 10 Starz
Last Standing
November 13, 2008 at 04:19 AM
I just read my boy E. Curt's "Last Standing". OMG, it knocked me out of the water. It really hit home with me on so many levels; love, survival, life, and hope. This work is truly that of a genius!
Showcase Your Poem
You left 102 poem comments 
Commented on the poem "*I Could Eat A Peach For Hours*" on 11/20/08 at 12:54 PM
