dang boo, this here is deep. I really like it, you do got major skills. I also can really relate, my life was spiraling just like this until the state threatened to take away my baby so I cried out to God and He cleaned me up only for me to go back to the misery. God blessed me with another son and then threatened to take em both and so now here I am... this was excellent and so many peeps need to hear more stuff like this. I'm really not sure why peeps still think this life is "fun" or that when they're doing their own thing that they are "free" I didn't become free until I no longer had to depend on drugs to get thru the day or pay the way...mucho luv...
man, nice lament...if it's possible for them to be nice. God is evident in your work, I believe He's smiling on you and saying, "finally another man after my heart." God bless you
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Commented on the poem "Welcome to my World" on 04/16/07 at 11:36 AM
