Commented on the poem "Slow Dance" on 11/16/09 at 10:03 PM
nice seduction poetic flow
Commented on the poem "Help The Child" on 11/16/09 at 09:53 PM
yung gurlz like to put picture of them pregnant on myspace like itz cool.I tell them u let a dick kum inside u raw and u not even married .real succeful give yourself a handclap and a pat on the back..anothre basterd being born n dis world.
Commented on the poem "Help The Child" on 11/16/09 at 09:51 PM
yea itz so sad how yung people thank itz cool to have kidz and kant even take care of them
Commented on the poem "GHETTO PRAYER" on 11/16/09 at 09:31 PM
yo this was a very blessing prayer mad god bless u.keep puting yo 5 finger together.and thingz will get better
wow shortie this poem is deep we need to do a callabo we write about the same thing problems n da world and our opinion on life
this nice real creative wordz and no water down lyrics just real poet wordz and feeling
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Commented on the poem "Slow Dance" on 11/16/09 at 10:03 PM
