Commented on the poem "DEAD LOVE" on 10/14/09 at 05:50 PM
"in moments of strength Im convinced ive moved on, but the trigger is stealthy sometimes sparked by a song"... I can really relate to this right now I know this exact feeling wow. This is a favorite
Commented on the poem "TAKE !T $LOW" on 10/14/09 at 05:45 PM
aww this is so sweet, this how is how i feel if a man is really serious hell take his time i like the way you ended this the last set was really sweet. romantic little love letter, good job.
Commented on the poem "Love Iz" on 10/14/09 at 05:40 PM
awww this is so sweet :) I love that you admire your big sis for all her struggles and determination. I hope my lil brother thinks of me like this :) good job Trill
this had a nice flow, I like your word choice and I understand exactly the kind of misery you are portraying here, some crave sex instead of love and dont understand the true meaning of i love you. so sad. this was a miserably sweet poem :) good job
Commented on the poem "Who's to blame?" on 10/09/09 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little puzzled by the end? But you are not to blame for what others see. Or what others do. U couldn't possible be to blame for all of these horrible
things. It's not your fault it's a combination of faults. I liked it though very expressive
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Commented on the poem "DEAD LOVE" on 10/14/09 at 05:50 PM
