Commented on the poem "soul servivor" on 07/19/09 at 02:04 PM
very nice
Commented on the poem "Mitch Bade" on 07/10/09 at 06:58 PM
I guess any written expression can be considered poetry if you stretch the definition far enough. But this just seems like a rant, malicious yeah, but not clever or moving. This may sound foolish, but your piece about eating pussy impressed me. This, on a poetry site, is just a little aggravating.
very vivid forceful language. A real description of something almost indescribable. Good shit.
Commented on the poem "Crescendo Annie" on 07/10/09 at 01:43 PM
R.I.P. It's unfortunate that with jokes and shit talking you can convince yourself that you won't miss something. And you absolutely so when it leaves.
Commented on the poem "Buffalo Henchman" on 07/08/09 at 03:07 PM
your work was recommended to me by another poet on this site, and I have to say that I'm impressed. Every word was placed just so. And the subject was ill, especially with me bing part black and native american. Good shit.
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Commented on the poem "soul servivor" on 07/19/09 at 02:04 PM
