tis was pretty good i thought it will be longer how u got into it at the begining but yep this poem is ood and im hungry o i ate off these words you just spoke and i give you 10 shotting stars
Commented on the poem "My Cry" on 03/20/08 at 05:08 PM
aaahhhh a cry that just makes you want to give up a cry that just makes you wanna break down and give up on everything a cry that just hurts to think about a cry that just make you wanna wake up from a nightmare a cry that you are more then willing to exchange for pain a cry that just make you wanat to give up on all that you try to do and yet you are still her and yet you are still standing let me tell you that it is ok to cry it is ok for a tear to come down you eye it is ok for you to want to give up and just scream just realize you are surviveing realize that you are not alone there is others that cry on the inside just like you but its up to you to let that cry to let that scream be raged in this battle that you fight this battle against life itself
Commented on the poem "This Is Me" on 03/20/08 at 04:58 PM
i likee how you put the things thatt everybody love and made the opposite compared to your self that mean you are real enough to know what you do.... so let me tell you this since this is you we all know that what we are is not what we want to be all the time we try to make a goal for ourself for our mind to takle us to a maturity level that we want to be... so since you know your weakness so since you know the storm is still in what you got to do is even though the storm let light appear cause if you are able to smile thoughout a whole storm then imagine when the storm is over you are going to be a living miracle dont limit yourself to happiness and then you will get blessed
Commented on the poem "A Nigga Job" on 03/06/08 at 01:12 AM
i dont think i understand i need a bit of an demostaron.... the only thing i get is to do the do you increase the number of people living on earth but i dont undertand what to do can you show
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