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Nickname: RavensGal22
Country: Canada
City: Toronto
State: Ontario
Gender: Female
Age: 34
Member Since: Nov 03, 2009
Last Login: Nov 20, 2009
Poems Submitted: 16
Poem Comments: 20
Poem Views: 325
Member Comments: 2


About Me
 
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About Me:
My name is Carrie Young, I enjoy writing for the simple reason it is a great way to relieve stress. I have been writing on and off for 20 years, I recall the first time I had a chance to write a piece that would have an impact on young people in our school system, the piece was called (Seems Like a Lifetime) it was inspired by Rememberance Day, and how our soldiers went to war and faught for our freedom, great write and it still brings a tear to my eye when I read it today, I was in grade 6 when I was asked to write a poem specifically for Rememberance Day so ever since, my goal is to bring fourth an emotional response to my readers and hope that they will feel the the feelings I felt while I was writing that piece. So enjoy everyone, and remember if your poems do not envoke an emotional response then you have not done your job correctly.

 


1. Boy Of The Streets
      by blondemama97
2. Sold Out (u.s. Not O...
      by Variator
3. Illuminati
      by Amira's mommy♥
4. So Sad
      by Sentinal
5. Universal Mind Control
      by ThepureBlackpoet
6. Sun-beam
      by geel
7. Exclusive Rights C...
      by ryearby
8. Occ
      by Jessica Ryan
9. Always And Forever
      by Jessica Ryan
10. Truth Of Slavery{p.1}
      by ThepureBlackpoet
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TITLE CATEGORY DATE SUBMITTED VIEWS COMMENTS
Land Of Tears emotions 11/04/09 (01:45 PM) 26 3
Wings spiritual 11/10/09 (10:18 AM) 17 3
Dark Heart emotions 11/06/09 (11:05 PM) 16 4
To my Grown Daughter family 11/06/09 (10:59 PM) 17 1
DEMONS emotions 11/06/09 (10:57 PM) 12 1
Remebering Those Who Fought for Our F... mourning 11/06/09 (10:54 PM) 38 0
EARTH life 11/06/09 (10:48 PM) 14 1
Brake These Chains emotions 11/04/09 (02:10 PM) 21 0
A child So Alone hate 11/04/09 (02:07 PM) 22 1
Embrace The Soul love 11/04/09 (01:54 PM) 20 0

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1. Sands of Time
2. I can
3. Land Of Tears
4. Good night Angel
5. Poetic Marijuana( ft...
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 Commented on the poem "Beyond mere reality?" on 11/20/09 at 10:00 AM
Nicely done, simple but profound. Carrie

 Commented on the poem "Sands of Time" on 11/18/09 at 08:10 PM
Love it, it has depth and passion, it takes you through emotions, well penned.

 Commented on the poem "I can" on 11/13/09 at 12:20 PM
You have shown a soft side thats great emotional writes such as this brings the readers attention, you have done that here. Nicely penned. Carrie

 Commented on the poem "Collabo - The Moment" on 11/13/09 at 12:17 PM
Nicely done

 Commented on the poem "Innocence Gone" on 11/12/09 at 07:44 AM
Nicely written, if only I had my Mom there to protect me from the choices I made when I was young. Carrie

 
  Silver and Gold
  November 12, 2009 at 07:56 AM
I might have been rich if I'd wanted the gold

instead of the friendships I've made.

I might have had fame if I'd sought for renown

in the hours when I purposely played.

Now I'm standing to-day on the far edge of life,

and I'm just looking backward to see

What I've done with the years and the days that were mine,

and all that has happened to me.

I haven't built much of a fortune to leave

to those who shall carry my name,

And nothing I've done shall entitle me now

to a place on the tablets of fame.

But I've loved the great sky and its spaces of blue;

I've lived with the birds and the trees;

I've turned from the splendor of silver and gold

to share in such pleasures as these.

I've given my time to the children who came;

together we've romped and we've played,

And I wouldn't exchange the glad hours spent

with them for the money that I might have made.

I chose to be known and be loved by the few,

and was deaf to the plaudits of men;

And I'd make the same choice should the chance

come to me to live my life over again.

I've lived with my friends and I've shared in their joys,

known sorrow with all of its tears;

I have harvested much from my acres of life,

though some say I've squandered my years.

For much that is fine has been mine to enjoy,

and I think I have lived to my best,

And I have no regret, as I'm nearing the end,

for the gold that I might have possessed.

 
 
 
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LateefahFreeWO...
11/06/09 (07:35 PM)
Welcome to GS Poetry and for commenting on one of my favorite poems. Photobucket

 
Variator
11/06/09 (04:38 PM)
What up man? like your work. im trying to get people to give me some constructive criticism so if your up for it as many comments you leave i will do the same, if not I will probably still comment yours, keep pushin that pen...late


 
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