Nickname:rhythmicsoul Country:United States City:Los Angeles State:CA Gender:Male Age:22 Member Since:Aug 03, 2007 Last Login:Sep 10, 2009 Poems Submitted:24 Poem Comments:142 Poem Views:4,075 Member Comments:33
Commented on the poem "alone." on 06/01/08 at 04:00 PM
ok so far this is a fav, just the honesty of it, no bells or whistles just honest emotion. LOVE it
Commented on the poem "blissful desire." on 06/01/08 at 03:48 PM
this one clever, i loved it...very sexual without risking coming off as crass and unnecessary, which is always a fine line when it comes to exploring the intimate moments of someones thoughts but you did the thing girly, loved it..SUCIA!
this is short and sweet and straight to the point, it flowed nicely and i can totally relate to the feeling, even tho it never seems to last long...especially when yanno, ur crazy and cant ACCEPT happiness, like some folks i kno...:-)
Commented on the poem "Affinity" on 05/13/08 at 10:32 PM
i love this one, not only because its GOOD lol but because i can relate on so many levels with it..its common that i ask myself why do i attract whom i attract, OVER AND OVER again lol..but ive never really thought to put it into words, i love how uve basically done it for me lol...another great one dear
Commented on the poem "The body..." on 05/10/08 at 01:06 AM
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Commented on the poem "alone." on 06/01/08 at 04:00 PM
