Nice poem. Love the message and the overall write.
Commented on the poem "Defeated" on 11/16/09 at 12:46 PM
Damn baby girl you were hurtin' for sure. I was feeling for you as I was reading your sad words. Cheer up sweetie. It's always darkest just before the dawn. ;) *kisses*
it's not fair that we have to live our lives concerned about other people all the time, but never being completely satisfied ourselves. why can't we get the chance to be completely happy? you need to think of your own feelings sometimes. you need to enjoy your life while you can. you have a right to be happy.
Art = Happiness
November 13, 2009 at 01:47 PM
Art is my life ... visual, musical, spoken, written ... all forms touch my innermost soul. I hope my words speak to you in some positive way. Thanks for stopping by. One Love.