Nickname:RoyalT Country:United States City:Living in a Fictional World in which Animated Characters rule over Humans State:NY Gender:Male Age:15 Member Since:Jul 02, 2007 Last Login:Nov 22, 2009 Poems Submitted:74 Poem Comments:441 Poem Views:6,371 Member Comments:109
Commented on the poem "Anna." on 09/02/09 at 09:43 AM
I love how you used the descriptions of body parts to emphasize growth and the similarities that the two of you share...I want a friendship like that...God only gave me sisters lol...this poem made my morning poet - Just when I thought that GS was facing it's own Great Depression
The sound of your tears amplified as I began to read further on...almost as if I were searching for you in the beginning and trying to find the face behind the voice...and at the end of the poem...I found you
I loveeeee this poem, the lines that particularly stood out to me and lit a lightbulb in my head : "Because we're passionate about our written symbolic form of church
Letting our family's spirit soar "- I refer to Poetry as my religion because it functions the same way that a religion does...and to eachother we preach. Through our experiences we present blessings... I'm very inspired...thank you.
Commented on the poem "Glad Game" on 07/11/09 at 01:02 PM
"The Rose you see, a fabrication of applied Foundation.... " At this point society seems to be so focused on what is seen externally...I agree with you all the way poet. :)