Nickname:RUBY RED DBL R Country:United States City:north bergen State:NJ Gender:Female Age:37 Member Since:Sep 13, 2007 Last Login:Oct 31, 2009 Poems Submitted:293 Poem Comments:1,686 Poem Views:27,022 Member Comments:495
Commented on the poem "LUV HURTS" on 08/22/09 at 11:46 PM
i love the message behind this poem, very descriptive depiction of the ups and downs of love, this is so very true....love will do a number on you.... i identify with this and like the way you expressed it, not matter how much love hurts us, we still manage to fall in love again
Commented on the poem "Pain" on 08/22/09 at 11:43 PM
so i tell dem wen u feel ur soul drop to da floor like a hole;
like an open bleedin sore
den uve bled like i bled nd wept like i wept.
den uve felt my pain.----- this part right here went hard i like the metaphors you used and the flow was hot....
Commented on the poem "Suicide Book" on 08/22/09 at 11:41 PM
wow this was mad emo... i dont really read poems like this i'm glad i did because you helped me think of suicide as a person who is contemplating it might look at it..... very nice job, i like the desperation, anxiety and pain coming from the narrative part of the poem
Commented on the poem "Sharp" on 08/19/09 at 02:28 PM
i like this poem its short relevant and to the point....
me encanto reading this spanglish poem..... yall did yall thing with it and i like the way you two translated the spainish parts of this poem.... dies estrellas y definitivamente un favorito para mi
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Its not about being strong... Its being able to find your strength in your weakness ...
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Commented on the poem "LUV HURTS" on 08/22/09 at 11:46 PM
