Nickname:sexxy brown sugar Country:United States City:unknown State:NC Gender:Female Age:32 Member Since:Jan 15, 2007 Last Login:Sep 27, 2008 Poems Submitted:34 Poem Comments:490 Poem Views:6,981 Member Comments:499
oh yea this is really getting good...i like how you gave each one of their views in how they were thinking . It just set up the next part even more, you have an idea where they maybe heading or least you think you do, but of course knowing you it will go in a different direction-lol....i've definitely enjoyed all that i've read tonight.
Commented on the poem "We Fuckin'" on 09/27/08 at 12:36 AM
hmm, now thats what im talking about...when have a desire for somebody like that, and they just turn you on in the slightest way...hmmm...nothing like the present moment to put it to the test. no sense in waiting any later for what you want. i shouldn't be reading stuff like this late at night-lol...but so enjoyed it.
i know the feeling of having one of those moments...just looking out to the moon and to the heavens, realizing its beauty in its shape and how it shines...just makes you want to just sigh for a moment...let it all go. the emotions were all there..you did a great job on this piece.
hmmmmmm and more hmmmmmm...Deon is certainly a piece of work in this write, such skills.....i love the sense of kinky, yet risky adventure in this...yea everybody cld walk by....but im sure doing this intense session that not on their minds...i wld love to be in her place right now. U just never know what goes on in a dark parking lot these days-lol. Excellent!
**letting out a long sigh**....ok now....yea there some boldness going on here....sometimes you just have to take advantage of the moment, in the most unusual places....keep things exciting and hot just like this write.
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Commented on the poem "Turning Point...Part III (Confessions)" on 09/27/08 at 12:41 AM
