I like this. It's heavy with meaningful rhymes but light as a feather. Keep writing.
Commented on the poem "My Green Eyes" on 03/20/09 at 06:42 PM
Short, simple and to the point. I like it, very much. So much scarred emotion's put through this even though it's not that long. Nice work.
Commented on the poem "Sweet silence" on 03/20/09 at 06:25 PM
Woah, you got some talent with the imagery used in your words, hun. It's so chilly and real-like."I am a single weeping willow, on an empty midnight, midwest plain.." Genius, right there. Greatest metaphor in all time. Nicely donnne!
Commented on the poem "The girl I want" on 03/19/09 at 10:02 PM
Beautiful write, straight up. It's got its little tones of laughter and plain warmth of heart. Nicely put together, especially with the repetition. Great work!