This was beautiful! The title is what really caught my eye to read it, but the poem itself is really breathtaking. This was perfectly executed by the both of you. Excellent job. This is definetly a new favorite for me=]
Commented on the poem "dreams after sex" on 11/07/07 at 12:29 PM
Woah woah woah...
Arent you a little young to be talking about all of this like this!? Lol.. Nice write... just try to work on your punctuation and spelling in some places, other than that this is good. Nice job=]
This was great. Line for line I just wanted to know where you were leading us with this one. Incredible use of words. And the rhyme scheme was great. Nice job