Nickname:Shira Country:United States City:Manchester State:NH Gender:Female Age:22 Member Since:Jan 07, 2007 Last Login:Dec 04, 2008 Poems Submitted:46 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:512 Poem Views:4,430 Member Comments:207
This was beautiful! The title is what really caught my eye to read it, but the poem itself is really breathtaking. This was perfectly executed by the both of you. Excellent job. This is definetly a new favorite for me=]
Wow, this was really something else! This is a great piece of work, the imagery was incredible. The emotion was real and wwas felt through out the entire piece. Great job with this.
Commented on the poem "dreams after sex" on 11/07/07 at 12:29 PM
Woah woah woah...
Arent you a little young to be talking about all of this like this!? Lol.. Nice write... just try to work on your punctuation and spelling in some places, other than that this is good. Nice job=]