you are a lioness of self honesty and you know yourself so well. When i read your writes, i see someon who knows who she is and what she speaks of. Why do i feel like im seeing some parts of myself in this? Sometimes i also wonder do i want to much, need to much from him? I never know, but i enjoy his company and smiles so im not complainin :)
yes gyrl, u are a helpless romantic. Head over heels and running into trees inlove, but this is something pure, and i always LOVE the way u compare love to Jesus. Cuz thats real
This is so inspiring, and the mental picture i drew from this would win an Oscar. I get to this place and i guess sometimes all i focus on is that wall, and the height of it. How i built it, and the negative force it holds. Its enough to make u break down sometimes, and sometimes i do, cuz i dont believe ima get over it, around it, or i wont have the strenghth to break it down....
The line i found most relatable was here : "...bleeding from my head beating fighting myself mentally trying ta find my inner man...just those next few lines i was like...thats me. Except im a young woman and much cuter lol...j/k But keep your head properly screwed on ya shoulders, and keep pushing. Never back down.
You ladies represented o so very well in this write right here. **plays the hook of Beyonce's Diva** Ladymae stated the facts, and Cin was able to break that ish down. Was almost like saying ok if u retards aint catch on to what my gyrl was saying, let me translate so u can pick it up. Great job!
B-Y.....i think this is the best well...one of the best poems ive read by you. So honest, and vulnerable, confident, yet unsure....this girl in so many ways reminds me of myself and the fear of finding out whats really there when it comes to having that chance of finding something real. But oooo who got u sprung? lol...let me stop being nosy :) But i loved this real talk.
ShY'S IS iN hER OwN LiL WOrLd.....YezZiR...So WhAt U WaiTiN 4???
April 25, 2007 at 03:12 PM
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