wow...this was greatness by the third time I'd read it to fully get it. Doesn't it suck being on this side of the phone, wonderin' wut happened to a good thing? Like a cage...and just like that, ur blaming yourself at every turn...you laid this out in steps: from the pondering to the self-esteem...nicely and smooth...very nice.
Commented on the poem "Love Hater" on 04/04/08 at 11:00 PM
DAAAAAAAAMN! LOL! I see why Syndel was laughing now...This is sooo slick. I thought I was the only one who looked at that lil' naked bastard as a trouble-maker....maybe that's why they make him a child...I don't trust him...
WOW...bruh....wow This hit. Where in your mind were you when u managed to record this on paper?? You're not as care-free as you would like everyone to beleive...and you took a swipe at the demon in my subconcious with this one...*fav*
I'm just now learnin' that this place, infact...does exist. The imagry was beautiful and got warmer with each stanza. "Seas so deep to drown out the power of lust" Had me stuck for a minute...You made ur own tiny world and took natural occurences and turned them into emotions...enough said :)
Commented on the poem "They" on 04/01/08 at 04:12 AM
Okay...I remember this one, but I didn't comment cause I said it in AIM...And I'll say it again...YOU HIT HOME. Noone views that path as an option now...just "The Only Escape" causing them to look down on ANY other choices...Deeper than that is: Whether they went to school at ur age or not...
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The reoccuring message that I keep receiving from people is: "It's about the satisfaction of writing" and "Comments don't make u a poet" and I keep thinking to myself..."Well, you could'a read your poem in Microsoft Word and been fullfilled, so why'd u post it???" I post to hear feedback cause it is easy for a writer to feel confident in a piece at first and then mixed after it is done. And I wanna see who could relate to my message and who dissagreed. Why not??? It's the atmosphere of the site and there's a whole system in place just to see to that...
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