Commented on the poem "Dear Kiara," on 09/13/09 at 01:16 PM
it is evident that you really love kiara, however if you beg for a 2nd chance with one who has already left your life by choice.wait to see if they make the choice to return, it they left for good. then let it go, never want a ex to come back if they dont want to or lost intrest in making it work with you.pray on it my fellow poet, pray hard from the bottom of your heart.hope it all works out for you.I'll pray for you both to find yalls way in this trial of the heart.
wow,lost for words as if the poem itself just wanted to be acknowledged for its greatness.brillant poetry, the love is absolute in life, true feelings never fall the in the gutters of careless hearts. your poem teaches that.wise words,strong poem title.
Commented on the poem "her eyes" on 09/08/09 at 11:25 AM
crazy talent you showing man.simple eyes is a simple thing all humans aquire, however you wrote the secret about simple eyes, more than look at em, you look in em, and withdraw love,happiness, sorrow, drama from the owner of those eyes you speak so proudly of. great write. gives a whole new meaning next time you say "look in my eyes, what do you see?" to the one you love.
well written,the love you present with such an absolute choice to be capable of love,willing to love, the will of the heart, with intent to do right by your love, you write with great knowledge on love.great lines,wordplay,and emotion
brillant man, you own a great deal of knowledge, inspirational poem,wisdom, you are a sage my fellow poet, the growth of your mind will only draw out the power of your heart, which will be evident in all the poems you write, no matter the topic. your mind is strong at a young age, that trait will make you truly great in poetry,as a man, as a role model.you seem to be destined for many great things. poetry is verbal light, the spirit, mind, and heart are three mirrors, reflect your emotions and shift the world with your words
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November 02, 2009 at 11:20 PM
I offer quality time when it comes to poetry, which is why it takes me 1-3months sometimes more to write just one poem. I think & write as hard as I can to keep my originality. so my beloved gs fam bear with me, I will post new poems, it just takes me quite some time
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Commented on the poem "Dear Kiara," on 09/13/09 at 01:16 PM
